'Very shortly, a new and exciting 18 hole golf course will be unveiled to the west of St Albans and to the rest of the world' - appalling use of English.
'The private Centurion Club is located near St Albans and features what will become a world-renowned golf course' - Crystal ball? I think those that play it will be the judge of that.
'Each hole is unique' - really? Difficult to tell by the hole by hole guide as you have only bothered to put 4 of the holes on it. They don't look very unique TBH, Teeing areas, greens, fairways, hazards, that sort of stuff.
The clubhouse probably is unique, they don't have one, it's a 'club building'.
Centurion Membership - the opening blurb on this ie a quick run down on what a centurion actually is, is lifted word for word from that definitive reference work Wikipedia. How bone idle is that?
For what they will probably be charging and for the class of member they wish to attract you think they could have put some effort in.
