The new Wonder Woman film is a feminist masterpiece, plain and simple: It's directed by a woman (Patty Jenkins), centers on a strong female superhero (Wonder Woman, obvi, played by Gal Gadot), and includes exactly zero male-gaze-y shots. But the film would've looked completely different had Joss Whedon written the script. Remember, in 2005, Whedon was actually recruited to write the script for Wonder Woman, but he was unable to complete a final draft and left the project two years later. Well, that unfinished draft has made its way onto the Internet—and fans aren't happy about it.
The script actually leaked last month, but the Internet didn't notice it until a few days ago. It's essentially the polar opposite of the Allan Heinberg–helmed script that we know and love. Steve Trevor is basically the central character in Whedon's Wonder Woman, while the female characters are plagued with descriptions like "lovely," "middle-aged but very much in her prime," and "more student than athlete." (That last one, if you're curious, essentially means "hot but bookish"—because heaven forbid a female character who isn't "hot" appears onscreen.)
The Mary Sue writer Teresa Jusino read through most of Whedon's script, which she describes as "badly written" and "cluelessly sexist." Jusino writes the script essentially treats Wonder Woman as an ethereal, mysterious object to be analyzed and gawked at by Boy Next Door Steve. At one point she's referred to as "impossibly strong and scantily clad." Hmm.
Jusino zeroes in on Steve and Diana's first encounter as more proof of this. In the excerpt, below, notice how Diana isn't even described as a human being but something "elemental" (whatever that means):
"To say she is beautiful is almost to miss the point. She is elemental, as natural and wild as the luminous flora surrounding. Her dark hair waterfalls to her shoulders in soft arcs and curls. Her body is curvaceous, but taut as a drawn bow. She wears burnished metal bracelets on both wrists, wide and intricately detailed. Her shift is of another era; we'd call it ancient Greek. She is barefoot."
See all those unnecessary, sexualized descriptions ("curvaceous, but taut"—cringe)? That's male-gaze dialogue at its worst—and all of Twitter noticed. Here are just a few reactions:
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